Explanation - How to be a good discoverer (Writing re-craft)

How to be a good discoverer  'Craft'

Remember the S.E.E. structure

S	Statement - Use a starter sentence to state a cause - To be a good scientist you need to be . . .
E	Explain - Define the cause - this means . . .
E	Evidence - explain the effect of the cause - if you do that then . . .

Title What is your Explanation about?	How to be a Good Discoverer
Introduction What are you going to explain?  Why is it important for us to pay attention to what you have to say?	“The real voyage of discovery consists not in seeking new landscapes, but in having new eyes.” Quoted by Marcel Proust. We were all born as a discoverer, discovering new things and unexpected objects. But as we grew older, we learnt more about the surroundings around us, how trees grew, how to plant a seed and why it rained. Here’s an explanation of how to be a good discoverer.
Paragraph One What is the first thing a good discoverer needs to do or have?  Why?  How will that help us?	To be a good discoverer you have to experience an open mind. It seems to me that this means being able to accept or show new ideas to a group or to a person. Also you must be motivated and passionate about what you are doing. Without motivation, where would we get our inspiration from? Being motivated means moving towards your achievement and being eager to know and learning about the surroundings around us.
Paragraph Two What is the first thing a good discoverer needs to do or have?  Why?  How will that help us?	Taking risks. Taking a risk is a big deal, meaning taking challenges and opportunities. Taking risks is easily defined as doing something you haven't done before. I mean it’s awake up call for those who don’t do anything, who don’t take on challenges that are provided for them, Who don’t realise they are leaders who people look up to.
Paragraph Three What is the first thing a good discoverer needs to do or have?  Why?  How will that help us?	Sacrifice. Discoverers begin with sacrifice, they take the future and let go of the past. This means you can’t always use sacrifice as letting go of your life trying to save someone else. Sacrifice  for a discoverer is taking out regular night outs. By this I mean having less time with friends and family and having more time to research.
Conclusion The conclusion sums up all the ideas and repeats a key message to end.  This could be a recommendation or a personal connection.	As written above I have included these three points, following this I bet you’ll end up with a bright future in the world of discovery. Being a discoverer also means being curious, wanting to ask life questions and wanting to know more about the world around us. Also, being a discoverer could have others wanting to be a discoverer, and when they become discoverers, many more could become one as well! Happy discovering!

This is my Explanation that I did for writing... I re-crafted it so that every paragraph made sense and every correct punctuation was in the correct place. I hope you enjoy reading my explanation about 'How to be a good discoverer.'

Also the words that have been hightlighted and underlined, are a goal I have achieved. Before my goal was to reach R4, and now I have acheived that goal. My next step in spelling is to use my letter/sounds, spelling rules, and meaningful chunks i.e: prefix, suffix, root words.

In writing I would like to gain ideas that are complex and elaborated.

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