Going to the Mall with my family (Bad EXPERIENCE)

In the holidays I went to Sylvia park mall with my family. It was seriously a bad Experience with all the Chaos that was going around. I hope you do enjoy my description writing... Please leave a comment;)

As I look through the window of the store seeing many clothing and accessories (Including my reflection) I see strangers walking around talking to their peers around them, minding their own business as a matter of fact. My Mum and dad, younger siblings stand around me glimpsing at what I am looking at. I turn around not noticing they have already left me behind (If only I could fly) The scent of food already filling my mind. Me, my Family and I enter ‘The Warehouse’..... ‘30 Percent off clothing’ it say’s on the sign.

The voice of my brother convincing my mum to buy him an Xbox 360 game, I can already see the redness in her eye’s. My mum sleepy and tired, argued with my dad not noticing everyone in the store was listening to what they were saying. I couldn't believe how humiliated I was. My mouth watering with hunger as the smell of spicy hot butter chicken filled the air.

I could taste burger king as we entered the food court, Everyone munching on their pieces of chicken or whatever they were eating. Tasting the fresh but suffocating air as I opened my mouth to take a bite of my cheese burger.Taking one last bite as all my food was finished. My family still eating.... While I’m sitting there in silent mode waiting for them to finish.

As soon as my Family finish, we head off. Up the escalators feeling dizzy as ever. My mum starts up the Car, hearing the engine as it warms up. The foot hits the petal and we now head home.

The Market...

Last week we did a T3 Writing assessment. We were given a picture and were demanded to write a description about it, by using our 5 senses (See, feel, Smell,Touch and Hear) This is my writing Assessment I did last week.

The Market....

Time is passing, 9:21 it Say's on my watch the markets finish at 12:00. I rush around trying to find some descent food to eat. My Temperature is rising. I don't even know where I'm going because there are so many food stores to look at.I am a victim of the sun, getting burnt by their beaming rays. My nose is attracted by a wonderful scent, Oh if I knew where it came from. Birds chirping their sweet melody making me want fall asleep.

Nearly half of the stores are closed, I haven't got any food yet. I see a sign which said "Muscle Fritters" Feeling the dribble coming down my chin with hunger. I know I shouldn't buy it but I have too. looking over to the other side, seeing teenagers like me. Munching on hot chips. Children eating Cinnamon doughnuts, watching the left over crumbs fall onto their clothes.

Butterflies bouncing on blue blossoms, How wonderful is that! I sit down into a chair. Feeling cold as ever. Makes me want to shiver a bit. Sniffing the beautiful fresh air and the nice smell of food. I check my watch again the time is 10:50. Ten more minutes to go.

I can hear people talking, talking about How wonderful their day was. Me and my friends all bunch in as a group looking around for some drinks and food. Touching each other. Telling one another to go there or anywhere. Times up! all stores are closing now. Now it's time for us to go.  

Descriptive writing - The circus

The Circus

blood flows through my veins up my spine and the cycle starts all over again. Four of us wait for the applause to stop, then the instructor A.K.A - Trainer graves his whip and instructs us to walk over towards the audience and make a loud noise (Which means in my calculation. Blowing their heads off.) I take a deep breath, hoping I won’t die. I let out a big noise. Children cover the ears because of loud surroundings booming in their head. I have five more..... wait two... no wait...... no seconds left. “Times Up!” A voice spoke.

I could feel the cold icy air tremble up my spine, (Even though I don’t have one). The four of us did many tricks to entertain the audience. I feel a painful pain on my left side, from one of those hard slaps from the trainers, telling me to hurry up. (Well it’s obvious that they're telling me to hurry because I'm too slow for their speed.) I think to myself: Well guess I ain't going to go faster because this is as fast as I can.

The other three elephants do many tricks, I can see them struggling through half of them, while I'm doing the best I can. The taste of candy floss in the air wanting me to just take a few bites of it. But no, I can’t muck around now because the show is almost over and I don’t want to lose my chance in being in the circus with many other animals.

I can see the instructor giving a fearful look, as if he is the boss, but he isn't. I carry on and look over the other side.The other elephants look as though they’re going to go to sleep. The instructor instructs us to sit down on the chairs, that were provided for us. The audience applause.

Now the show has ended, I can now sit down and relax.

Today we were given photos. We had the oppotunity to choose our own picture instead of the teacher to write about. This was a practise for tomorrows real writng test (Descriptive)